Monday, November 22, 2010

animal farm 8

1. excess ;  I had to be bumped up a grade because I excess in my work .
2. sprawling ;  I was sprawling on the floor as I was being tickled .
3. sallied ; As I got yelled at im sallied .
4. solemn ; feel very solemn to do this .
5. decree ; My mother decreed that I was grounded .
6. lamentation ; Everyone heard there pity lamentation .
7. ferociously ; That man's yell seemed very ferociously at that the time .
8. surmounted ; She surmounted her fear of clown's .
9. cowardice ; I had a lack of cowardice .

1 comment:

  1. Don't forget to ALWAYS use a capital 'I' when referring to yourself.

    Little 'i' has the effect of making writing look like it was created by a child.

    Some of your sentences are quite fluent. I am rewording a couple for you to make them less awkward.

    I had to be bumped up a grade because I completed excess work.

    I was sprawling on the floor when I was being tickled.

    As I got yelled at I sallied out of the room.

    I feel very solemn about this.

    Everyone heard their cry of lamentation.

    That man yelled very ferociously at the time.

    Keep smiling and PLEASE GO BACK TO YOUR ASSIGNED SEAT.

    ReplyDelete